Balanced argument

We needed to create a balanced argument with 1 of the 4 topics we had. I selected "Should children be allowed to watch whatever they want on television?"

"Should children be allowed to watch 

whatever they want on television?"

Some kids are allowed to watch whatever they want on TV, what do you think about it?

Firstly, children can learn things when they're watching television. They can learn numbers, colours, animals and things about them, etc. It can be a good way for very little kids to learn or when you're ill.

On the contrary, there are some things that there not appropiate for them, for example, they can learn offensive language. If they're not watching cartoons, it's better to watch it with an adult. Also, it isn't good to be all the time around technology. There another ways of entertainment, like books, games and going outside. It's good to socialize.

To sum up, children shouldn't watch whatever they want on TV. They can learn things that we don't want them to, and they may be all the day watching TV. Play or read are some of the million of things they can do in their free time. Why they should be inside in front of a technology device whan they can do amazing things?